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A pulse passing by.

2018-01-20 入りましたPhilippines
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  • moonset
    moonset1mth
    に返信 moonset

    I also think that if the MC was a normal kid instead of an adult in a kids body as a reader i would have thought we have an emotionally intelligent kid but is still immature and lost. That would have been so interesting to follow. But with MC being an adult the displayed dramatic and emotional introspection instead felt stupid.

    Ch 15 CH_15
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    Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
    アニメ·コミックス · FictionOnlyReader
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  • moonset
    moonset1mth
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    All of this would have made sense if the MC was not an adult transmigrated. These past chapters would actually be really good if we had a normal kid who is suffering. But with our knowledge as readers of the mc being an adult, the events that would have been emotionally impactful instead became a dissonant and frustrating ordeal to read.

    Ch 15 CH_15
    altalt
    Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
    アニメ·コミックス · FictionOnlyReader
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  • moonset
    moonset1yr
    に返信 BigReader500

    sheesh were did this come from, are we reading the same thing? lol

    Ch 30 Debt
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    The Martial Unity
    アクション · Lord_Streak
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  • moonset
    moonset1yr
    に返信 JDice

    Don't forget world building through the discussion of martial arts skills as the MC compares it to his past knowledge. I don't understand why you call this stuff fluff when there is so much substance to it.

    Ch 28 Limitless
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    The Martial Unity
    アクション · Lord_Streak
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  • moonset
    moonset2yr
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    oh please don't go the harem route author.

    Ch 101 Chapter 47: Getting to Know the Ellis Family
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    Risen World
    都市 · VivitheGreat
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