the story caught my interest. However, to start locking chapters this early is simply dumb. Check out all other novelist and you will see they don't do that till 30 or chapter 50th chapter. sorry I'm out .

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interesting

more please

I'm sad you ending the story here. None think to carry on to the next generation? However , I loved reading your novel [img=Feeling it]

You might not kmow; However I wrmt to another of efforts to get 3 day free reading only to find chapters locked awW[img=nervous][img=faceslap]not happy

yep

Also noticed the chapters are short or at least seem so. most I've read here have chapters of fifteen hundred words.

story has a good start.only thing I see is slow updates are not good. most will move on to other stories .it's better to stockpile at least 40 chapters minimum .then post a chapter every 2 or 1 day.that will keep readers caught up in the story.

personally it sounds like the poor guy got ripped off in his reincarnation . I'd be yelling out for God ect and report it.

I must say if they would make movies out of this story it would be awesome [img=recommend]

interesting so far [img=recommend]

seriously?chapters locked this early?The standard is not to lock chapters until chapter 30 or 40

lightning

I'm curious. Are all the guys in this store hermaphrodites? both male and female? If not,males are referred to as he,him,male.

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