Voidsinger
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Voidsinger1mthに返信 little_weirdo- Voidsinger3mthに返信 horrendous_potato
- Voidsinger5mthコメント
And, you lost me at katana. It's almost as if every wannabe author needs a katana. So, every protagonist in their novels gets a katana. To me, at this point, katana has become synonymous with wannabes.
この段落は削除されました。 - Voidsinger5mth発表
Just like its name, the book is chaotic - littered with bad grammar and jarring gaps in the flow of the story. The plot seems to be intruiging but, it needs to edited and some parts need to rewritten - they disrupt the reader, destroying the natural flow of world building and immeraion into the story.Overall, a good effort on the part of the author, but, it's not a masterpiece.
- Voidsinger5mthコメント
Uh huh. Sure. Sure.
Du You broke into a smile. It makes sense, though. China hundreds of years ago was the most powerful nation in the world, with the largest population. In the face of adversity, the Chinese have always been the most capable of adaptation and the fastest developing ethnic group, none could compare. - Voidsinger5mthコメント
And, here comes the propoganda.
Firstly, there was the Asia Alliance where he was located, which basically occupied the whole of Asia and could be counted as the largest alliance in the world. The Chinese people occupied a dominant role in this alliance. In this life, the Chinese were one of the world's top ethnic groups. As for the islands in the east, well, they basically had no opportunity to commit the dishonorable acts they did in the past. - Voidsinger7mthに返信 Gortox
As if I care. lol.
All land is now state-owned, so the idea of inheritance has long since vanished. - Voidsinger7mthコメント
Ahh, yes. Everything stolen by the thieves of CCP.
All land is now state-owned, so the idea of inheritance has long since vanished. - Voidsinger11mthコメント
embedded.
Of course, it also helped that this near Babylon, the seabed was imbedded with numerous rods, emitting a soft red light. - Voidsinger1yrコメント
Tathagata.
'Hongjun is real, meaning the other characters from mythologies are real–including Tagatha, the founder of Buddhism. - Voidsinger1yrに返信 wild_gamer
- Voidsinger1yrコメントAs I went through a large amount of information on HIV, I discovered that HIV could be treated.detailStarting As A Top Student, I Get Back 100 Times The Knowledge I Teach都市 · University Top Student
- Voidsinger1yrコメントHe had started dating Sophie when he was just 17, while Sophie at the time was much older at 22.
- Voidsinger1yrコメントMax looked at the smooth green pendant with the two winged angel shape and he kissed it long and hard before wearing it around his neck.
- Voidsinger1yrに返信 kyair
I did - over a year ago.
Leonel wasn't a God. He wasn't judge, jury and executioner, nor could his fragile mind state withstand such a burden. - Voidsinger1yrコメント"I'm aware of this, and I know my request was disrespectful. As you can guess, I wanted to create a longevity technique base on your physique to acquire nine lives after proving the Dao.
- Voidsinger1yrに返信 DaoistGrandFate
A cat, rather.
"I'm aware of this, and I know my request was disrespectful. As you can guess, I wanted to create a longevity technique base on your physique to acquire nine lives after proving the Dao.