SonataL
Lv5
The obscure we see eventually. The completely obvious, it seems, takes longer. ~Edward R. Murrow
2017-12-25 入りましたCanada
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SonataL4 years agoに返信 IzanmiIf you want a good One Piece FF, I recommend reading "A Gamer in South Blue" by LordVishnu. They recently came back so chapters are being updated again.
- SonataL4 years agoコメント
Kinda OP since it would also affect those significantly stronger than him by the 50% decrease in abilities.
- SonataL4 years agoコメント
Run on sentence
- SonataL4 years agoコメント
You're switching between present and past tense. You said "continued" which is past and then say "tries", which is present.
この段落は削除されました。 - SonataL4 years agoコメント
You're good author! This is a fresh of breath air in this site so one day without a chapter is fine. Better to get quality chapters than a sick author.
- SonataL4 years agoコメント
No. Same reason as the other 2, it seems a bit forced.