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Use chat gbt? Just write the following in chat gbt: Correct all gramatical errors: Paste in chapter.

Chapter 1 had more dialog because of that it was better. And you shouldnt rush with the plot. If you do a time skip, you should say the things that he did in that time fragme. Maybe try reading Tyranny of Steel, if you do like him it would be perfect. But you dont have to write 1000 chapters like him. You can do it shorter.

This chapter was much better than then the other ones, keep going like this👍

You repeat yourself too much, you alredy talked about the digger pasha. And now you do it again. You should change that and write that just in 1 chapter. And it feels like your wrote the story with chat gbt…

Wrong post?

I have a feeling, that this guy will die 😅

His parents are italian, that means he is italian…. If my children are born in Italy, and are Italien citizen. Dies not mean they are Italian, because my wife and I are not Italian………..

Google is your friend just use it 😂 Napoleon's family was of Italian origin…

He is Italian, but fought for France 😂

Really good work 👍