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Thanks for the review! Also thanks for the idea. I never read realistic fiction, reading some would help me write better.
I was only comparing countries, nothing to do with continents. Also African continent is only less than twice as big as Russia.
An Average Cultivator is the original one. Copy pasted in the other one for a contest. Initially wanted to stop updating it after the contest but it's collections spiked after being featured. Now I'm not sure which one to continue with. The first one is sentiment, the second is a bit ahead in the race, which one do you think I should drop? I wanna stick with sentiment and get it contracted. What do you think?
Thanks for the review and don't worry he does get better.
There are many things wrong with his brain. Which do you mean?
Thanks for the feedback. The MC's supposed to be exactly like you described for the first part which I intended to end around chapter 15. I guess I got carried away writing and we'll have atleast 4 more chapters of loser mc. Sorry about that. I'll be careful in the future. He'll be much more reserved, quiet in the next part. You'll never see the loser mc again. Well, not this kind of irritating loser.
Yes, search urumi weapon on the net. I didn't want to use whip sword as it could be sectioned.
Being low key when weak is the logical thing to do. The first chapter his fear and logic spoke. Mainly fear. This time he lost his logic and fear to the excitement that he felt when an MC crushes everyone with his money in auctions. The mc right now is a fickle minded, impulsive, weak willed fellow. His character will grow as the novel moves forward. I realise this scene could've been done better but I just couldn't get the words. I am working on my writing and will soon get it up to standard. Keep pointing out my mistakes till then. Thanks!
He is under the delusion that like all transmigration novels, he will get some cheat and rule the world. He is the main character and superior to all others. But in reality he still is insecure, impulsive and all that he was previously. The mix lead to doing or saying some stuff and regretting when it backfires. I hope it makes sense.
I realise it may be slow without a cheat so how about this wait a month for the chapters to accumulate and then read. By then I will have the mc ready and it would be a pure cultivation novel.