LordEmil

think this was a mistake as they don't know Zoids yet unless I missed something.

Bench probably:

A lot of system novels I read end up becoming more like wish fulfillment. Which I don't dislike but when you see it so many times it becomes a little stale. So I like that he's getting assistance but it's not making him "overpowered" straight away. Having the MC struggle a bit makes for a far better reading experience. Although it requires a lot more effort to make the struggle interesting and not just something that is there. Don't read too much into this as I already like what you've got so far so I'm positive you got it.

#AuthorsHaveFeelingsToo. You got this bro. You did right as she was way out of line. We in 2026 not the 50's. Enjoying the story so far.

While it's nice that you understood that. I feel like that may have been too harsh for a novel only at chapter 18. While I like slower stories, I can understand that sometimes you have to streamline things to keep people interested. To sum it up. You are doing great already and just take your time with moments that feel appropriate for the story you are trying to create.

While I do love the idea of all these different cartoons converging like this I do know a lot of people run into the issue of keeping track of everyone and making them unique. I haven't seen issues yet so whatever you're doing, keep it up!

take my man? nah we gonna have to square up.