lorenzo86

I can't believe I paid for this it unreadable

from chapter 83 on , the grammor is just terrible , please edit your chapter's it will make reading this book much more enjoyable

where Is chapter 1 to 67?

this IS a great novel , it just sad that the same chapter IS reapeated 3 Times in the row , and int the last 20 chapters a paragraphe IS writing twice , unfortunaly it's us readers who are paying for these mistakes

honestly i'm stick and tired of face slapping a slow but steady progress IS more it more Real . In stead of making most of the people dumb , the author make the Mc carful and a little quirky and Can relate better to the Mc I'm enjoying this novel and want to thanks the autor and the translator for his work

A surprsing good read , well writen I read all the 19 pages in one go , the only dowside is the updates , let's hope the author doesn't give up witing this fiction

Well I agree with the author even if your in the Mc world as a normal person without any power well what can you do a period of adaptation is normal making plans well really life rent job family has already plenty of difficulties and those are needed to plan any further

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola