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Nou

Nou

Lv4
2017-06-21 入りましたUnited States
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  • Nou
    Nou2yr
    コメント

    We switched from third-person perspective to first-person perspective here now

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    altalt
    Lunaria
    ファンタジー · SenorSleep
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  • Nou
    Nou2yr
    コメント

    Out patrolling with a 3-year-old son, and Damian isn't near Arche... hm...

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    altalt
    Lunaria
    ファンタジー · SenorSleep
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  • Nou
    Nou2yr
    コメント

    "until *I* was old enough" I didn't realize you jumped into the story too, o' Sir Author.

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    Lunaria
    ファンタジー · SenorSleep
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  • Nou
    Nou2yr
    コメント

    She's making an agreement with a child who is a few months old who is crawling around in the middle of the night? No freak out. No wondering how the baby got there. How the baby escaped. Instead, casually asking and waiting for a response from an infant who is a few months old?

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    altalt
    Lunaria
    ファンタジー · SenorSleep
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  • Nou
    Nou2yr
    コメント

    Doors are latched closed. He's crawling. Yet he can crawl out the doors?

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    altalt
    Lunaria
    ファンタジー · SenorSleep
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  • Nou
    Nou3yr
    に返信 dayamaryllis

    Well, because when I first wrote this review, there were like, just a few chapters?

    altalt
    My House of Horrors
    ホラー · I Fix Air-Conditioner
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  • Nou
    Nou3yr
    に返信 Tenzai

    I appreciate your enthusiasm! Try pinging the higher ups on discord or on the forums. You'll get better chance for response there. Unfortunately, I don't think the higher ups check these reviews at all.

    altalt
    Plundering the Heavens
    東方 · Ghost of Dark Mountain
    detail
  • Nou
    Nou3yr
    に返信 FlamesOfDespair

    Translation was put to a stop. Something something something politics/policies/stats/target goals.

    altalt
    Plundering the Heavens
    東方 · Ghost of Dark Mountain
    detail