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No need to apologize man, I mean, it's not like you left a bad review, not to mention that I do agree with everything you said. The novel is most of the time light-hearted, it all centers on the group of main characters and finding out more about the world and universe, not to mention about Reign and what is going on with him. I had planned on making it darker to be honest, but this is the first novel I had ever written, and thanks to my lack of experience back then, I did end up writing more 'fillers' than I would like to have right now, and I wasn't sure how to execute some plot points I had. Now, we'll see what happens next as I haven't written even a third of what I had planned for the novel, hopefully I'll get some more views and recognition, but for now, I'll just have to continue writing and getting better and better at it.
Ok I got confused at the end there, what character do you mean? If you mean the ones who went after Miriam, that was only done to set up an ambush. I don't really remember ever writing any other type of villain young master other than that, which was actually a cover for the trap they set up. Other than that, yeah, I do agree with your review, the novel doesn't really have impactful deaths. There are a couple of deaths later on, but even then, yeah, not that impactful. If you do want a darker story, with some more deaths and higher stakes, I do recommend you check out my 2nd novel, I have written that one differently compared to this. Anyway, thanks for the review man, have a good one
Not sure if you made a mistake there, I never stopped writing here, been writing on Webnovel for about 3 years now
I at first planned this to be filler, a short one, but then I got the idea of what to do next, for the next volume to not be the same as before, them just traveling to reach the Empire and that is it. The quest they will get after this will set things in motion for the next volume, which is highly connected to what happened in Linscht
Yes, the servants are 100% loyal to Lyle
No romance yet, no harem planned
Well this all makes it seem that much more time has passed than it truly has, I mean, they are moving much faster than sound, and even their speed of talking is very different. Yes, holding is what they need to do, but don't forget that this guy could just kill the others if Reign did not fight with everything he had, and then they could just surround him and take him down as well.
For the past month or so I've been getting like 50 - 60 comments a day on both novels, I just can't get to answering them bro, far too many
Well I started counting differently. The First one they entered is not counted, since it is the one they docked and is safe, only from then on are they counted