Lighting_Breeze
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Lighting_Breeze4 months agoコメントBoring useless chapters
- Lighting_Breeze4 months agoコメント
He hadn't even slept with her😒😒
- Lighting_Breeze5 months agoコメント
That's a great book if you wanna learn by solving problems
- Lighting_Breezea year ago発表
Top quality webnovel original novel. World building is the best.
- Lighting_Breeze2 years agoコメント
When be first came to the world or after some years? Three paragraphs and already we see contradictiory stuff written 😒
この段落は削除されました。 - Lighting_Breeze2 years agoコメント
Wouldn't expect to read about EU driving cycles here... WTLP
- Lighting_Breeze3 years agoコメント
Who can sleep on such a situation?!?
この段落は削除されました。 - Lighting_Breeze3 years ago発表
This is a really good story, with an interesting concept and MC and side characters. The big flaw it has is that some arcs go on for so much longer than I would like. I wanna see progression, real progression for example skipping to the future when arrived at the castle was nice. However returning to the past and spending 20 chapters was boring. Some past recalling would be cool 4 or 5 chapters would be acceptable. Reading a whole bunch of chapters like that was not.
- Lighting_Breeze3 years ago発表
There are no low reviews and this novel definitely isn't so unbelievably good to justify this so I guess my review will also be removed, so I'll be short. It's not bad, but it's definitely not novel and not well thought. Mc often acts like an idiot and for no apparent reason everything goes well..there's no real tension. Also there are tons of chapters that don't contribute anything to the plot. Anyways as I said it's not bad, compared to the average novel in this platform.