like there's no disrespect but it needs a rewrite to be better like premise is cool izuku with speed force cause he definitely would use it better than alot of speedsters plus material science is more advanced in mha so momo could make materials that would be perfect for speedster until he learned how to make speedforce constructs

there are a couple of glaring issues that can be fixed one in the beginning if you use a character with a truth detector quirk they would determine izukus dad not to have done the crime so you should have both parents killed otherwise that's just a big plot hole which would require rewriting some of this but the more you write using broken logic in the story the more you would need to change for the edited version should you write one

honestly I'd prefer every other day uploads to help prevent burnout and give a potential for some chapter stockpiling

hotel transylvaniahelsing anime or van helsing the movie with Hugh Jackman honestly the Hugh Jackman one would be interesting but it's likely the anime but the hotel transylvania would be comedic and set up for alot of interesting developments

so far so good but one thing is some ghost riders can use wings to fly In a couple versions I've seen most utilize vehicles to stay with the times but ghost riders look pretty much like angels of death with wings

mc does but just because they have the mana doesn't mean they are spamming it every second which would be cool fire bolt rapid fire

and the corrections to some of the Asian phrases needs to be adjusted since it's written in a mtl format

the story so far is decent. There are a few corrections needing to be made like character names but if someone where to edit this and format it could actually be a very popular story

batman is gonna have constant fits with mcs weapons being guns though angelic blades would also be useful for many situations

well since he has a distance atta and a reinforced sword skill he only needs the shield skill and a movement based skill to complete the attack skill set though regeneration of resources is also a priority

interesting theme character wise I love the progression since he's unlocking different rangers and has access to the abilities illusions using mystic force spells is possible

I love it there's incredible pacing reasonable nerfs that benefit mc because of it and ability wise thoughts being put in good job keep up the good work

mcs totally gonna rip the hero commission apart can totally see mc building an opposing organization that acts as an adventures guild that allows quirk usage as a all around ability to boost production and development and use reconstruction from hero villain battles as a goodwill to further dismantle the common hero villain dynamic and make use of unconventional quirks that are day to day based

is it going to stay here or be a new novel spot altogether

good chapter but could we get an auxiliary chapter with all current talents and such

this was an amazing story all the way up to chapter 16 and then author did an unforgivable not maximizing mc character growth and potential and there isn't any significant reason or reward for doing so it was spontaneous and seemed so rushed now it is redeemable by rewriting the end of chapter 16 forgoing level up to maximize potential but otherwise after chap 16 so far I have lost interest in this story

I agree with this and quite honestly as chaos host o don't think chaos would allow for a level up without maximizing his stat potential so personally this kinda killed my enjoyment of the story

honestly excited for speed force constructs since vibrating swords would be able to cut through all materials and well speed force suit do we have a design in mind or not quite yet

other than povs chapter names and identifiable arcs once you get to that point otherwise a great start hopefully mc gains control or melds with Zarathos because even if he rides different vehicles winged ghost rider is terrifying but his range of powers is really interesting all around

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