JokerProdijay
A joker who loves depth and plot twists
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JokerProdijay13dコメントIt’s only been twenty Years
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Interesting story, you forgot to explain how his hands returned after they got cut off, and a couple more plot holes here and there, but it feels great to read, has a nice and steady pace to it, but remember, Don’t Sink into Cliches unless you have too! Good luck, take your time and can’t wait to read more!
- JokerProdijay9mthコメント
Thank you! Thank you so much! You don’t know how much this brings me confidence to continue! I’m a new author and am having confidence issues in knowing where I stand with my readers as they don’t comment mostly to reply! I’ll try to hit three Chaps this week as a thank you!
Ch 18 Chapter 17: Training Begins, Do you prefer Gas or Electric? - JokerProdijay9mthに返信 BOKC_Trvll
Thank you, which part do you like? It's taking me forever to write it out because I keep getting inspiration from my research into the system that makes up the world of Naruto, as half the time it's Chakra good magic, wow! With most novels or even people bring Technology, Ki, or Magic into the world when I think it was already there, you just need to dig deep enough!
Ch 18 Chapter 17: Training Begins, Do you prefer Gas or Electric? - JokerProdijay9mthに返信 Virusban
It’ll be explained in later chapters, but think Naruto equivalent of Cursed Spirits
Although not without supervision because each time we go out I could tell there were several if not more Yokai following our every move to make sure we didn't get hurt. - JokerProdijay1yrに返信 dippmann
Don’t worry, he will get there. I‘m just introducing the power system as well as how his powers will work in the early stages. From a more Fantastical setting to a Semi futuristic and primal society in the future chapters
"I'm fine... Just. A little winded. Damn Kekkai, you didn't have to hit me so hard!" Akane scolded while wheezing a little to catch her breath. - JokerProdijay1yrコメント
Just six dollars? Man you underestimate the wages of delivery people
His mission today was to transport a batch of milk to the neighboring central city, with a reward of about ten dollars, which would earn him about six dollars after deducting the fuel cost, just enough for his living expenses for about five days. - JokerProdijay1yrに返信 BOKC_TrvllCh 12 Chapter 11: Strange Manifestation
- JokerProdijay1yrに返信 Tree_Lava
Thanks for the comment, I'll fix that. Did you know that Naruto’s world is also called Earth? Even though its size is nearly 3 times ours?
Hi, Let me introduce myself, Formally Ken McKoy, native American of Blue Star. Got an opportunity to transmigrate to the world of CyberPunk Edgerunners but for some strange reason, my so-called 'Evaluater' had a change of heart and sent me here, the world of Naruto. - JokerProdijay1yrに返信 Tree_Lava
I’m one who cried when ‘Lisa’ sang ‘Surface Pressure’
Ken was silent as he watched the show come to a depressing and regretful end. Closing his browser he rolled his chair back and wiped the tear stains from his face. He took a long breath in and then let it out staring at the ceiling of his room. - JokerProdijay1yrに返信 BOKC_Trvll
This one. It's remake of the story outline. and how do you feeel about the story so far?
Prologue - JokerProdijay1yr発表
- JokerProdijay1yrに返信 Helios_SolCh 8 Chapter 6: Lost Potential, New Beginnings (Edited)
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- JokerProdijay1yrコメントCh 4 Chapter 3: Ishigami Village pt.3 (Edited)
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Basically these guys are giant chocobos breed by the clan members.
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- JokerProdijay1yrコメントCh 3 Sorry!