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like nice balance fanfic without harem,
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Choir1yrに返信 Mr_Nightmaybe its mean that he cant get its effect because of level difference so "hiding" skill only become an ornament like a flower.. its here but useless even if not completely
But it was only flowers...- Choir2yrコメント
... his body become iron... so, he can create nanochip with his power and install jarvis directly to his body.. also access chat directly. well it high risk (a problem with brain) and high reward..
Which he immediately know as Tetsu-Tetsu no Mi. As for why he exchanged the Yami-Yami no Mi for this devil fruit. Well, it's because he needs a medium to activate his ability [Fire God Hammer] which happens to be needed any material including metal. - Choir2yrコメントCh 71 Chapter 71: Golden Thunder Bamboo Spear Lightning Formation
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please dont add more harem. 2 is enough so you can focuse more to the plot like add some inspiration from another novel or deeping bond with his friend or you can also make some tease with new girl like in original or make pairing with his friend ( i mean its so sad that except lu piao, they all single). its also interesting to see different pov to make them more alive. i mean his goal is to get stong as soon as possible, and its not likely a dual cultivation need a different girl to work.
Xia Ning'er and Ye Ziyun looked at him proudly. As if they hadn't expected anything less of him. Even Huyan Lanruo was looking at him with an interest. - Choir2yrコメント
now... how many logs, sasuke will burn?
"For the first battle, we have Uchiha Sasuke Vs. Hibachi." - Choir2yrコメント
btw please spoil me a bit. is the chat group's member all girl except mc or there will be other guys?
While we all agreed that Rumi would be the next member, we have to make sure to test out that we can trust her after all she is a hero after all we can't be too certain of things when it comes to people. - Choir3yrコメント
thanos.. is yhat you?
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well, it will make the word have a different mean. but thanks for pointing it. I also feel it a bit weird so I change it
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Nah, you're right. its better use may for this
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hmm, I think 'is'
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