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Gridlock

Gridlock

Lv4

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2017-04-21 入りましたCanada
2.7h

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  • Gridlock
    Gridlock4 years ago
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    Very poor writing. The author is a *******. So bam God's Santuary is released and suddenly murder is okay. Lol its not that simple. In a advanced technological era, there WILL be laws and they will be strictly enforced. This is just one of the MANY examples where it shows just how brainless and clueless the author is. Its like its written by a child.

  • Gridlock
    Gridlock4 years ago
    発表

    Author forgot this was a light novel about cooking and instead in later chapters chooses to put an emphasis on generic cultivation ****, food isn't even described properly at this point. Ridiculous. Even the characters are generic. Plot is also repetitive. COME ON, GET YOUR CREATIVE BRAINS CELLS RUNNING. Only thing good about this is the update stability. Good job on that.