So MC becoming a terrorist now? the parents should be brain dead if they had believed the nonsense. Why do you need to become a terrorists any smart man would have informed the same to WAA. And they would have taken care of it. why to do it in shadows

Hi Author, I believe it is time for MC to get a special class or bloodlines

Hi Author this book is getting too boring. This book has too many conpitations there is nothing else I read all the chapters and most of the chapters is about some usless competition. I getting literally bored there is zero character development. This book is becoming more like trash Chinese novel. If this keeps on going then I will drop this book. I believe most others also will drop this book.

I read till 118 chapterd and thought to give my opinion. The world building is good and MC power growth is quite unique. But, there are several drawbacks that make this book very mid level: • One MC who wants to live forever lonely whitout trying to gain any influence in the world. There is no real motivation for him to trying to live forever he was afraid of death. (To Author just wanted to ask what MC will do once he achieve immotality lock himself in a room and sleep. Here you could have made MC the Immortal Emporer of Human Race or something. But you chose not to and wasted the potential to turn this novel into kingdom building novel) • Next almost all are chatecters are one dimensional and they are only trying to backstab one another with zero motivations and character growth. (Here in this book it's just comical how bad the one dimensional characters are just let me give you an example Rose she just comes to MC for his help in one expedition and before he even agrees to join the expedition she reveles the secret of expedition and later regrets it and try to kill him by sending assains on his teail 😮‍💨😮‍💨) • And finally the main drawback is there is no fun or excitement in reading this book it felt tedious. I did not even felt one WOW! or Oh Cool! factor while reading this book that is why this book is not widely recognized. This book has great potential but Author wasted it. Author need to read someother top books in this platform before he starts writing.

Author this is becoming repetitive. Most of the novel is all about competition. Please reduce the competition and Start building the world a bit more.

Because of the author the book became a boring waste of time. First 40 to 50 chapter the story was excellent later it became a complete waste as there is zero progress in story lot side characters are introduced and side characters play more imortant role in most of chapters than main characters. Author no one cares about side characters or their plots who will take a back stage once the story arc is finished. So stope wasting readers time. If you want to write a 5000 chapter novel it is OK but there should be a proper story to write.

Author this is good, this is excellent way of doing face slapping. I didn't like how you wrote how rookies hadled MC in his reporting guild quaters but here I like how you handel in this situation.

Typical Chinese nationalist novel. China supreme all other nations are waste. Just kill other nationals and all Chinese will consider you a hero

This book is so bad MC is too dumb. He does not want to grow strong at all. All he wants is to create a Harem and there are nearly more than 10 female leads already introduced in 250 chapters and all female leads are one dimensional and there is zero to very little progress in story is happening in every chapter and most of the chapters are filled with very cringe jokes too much. It is like Author wants to write the most dumbest novel on this platform. If this novel was free to read then it can be given a shot but it cost too much to read a chapter. I don't know what Author is thinking writing this shit. I understood now that this Author is one hell of a Greedy guy. So congrats Author you permanently lost one reader. I will not read any of your novels from now on.

Author this is getting boring. he is no 1 rookie who has won the whole nation wide tournament and you keep on giving dumb rookies for MC to face slap this is dumb. Atheist one guy should be knowing that MC is National Champion. No one knows common I understand if common people did not know this but other Characters being rookies themselves should know who MC is. It is like you are a football player and you don't know who Messi is.

Author great book, really loved it.

The dumbest thing I have ever read revealing the truth the MC is not the TRUE son and son is dead and his soul crossed over to his sons body. No parent can accept that and they can never treat the MC as TRUE son.

Author this book is boring after 60 chapters. MC is toooooooo OP all he does he go around kill strong monsters and help others level up and even strong players are just inects for because he is a player who's level is above 800 while all other players level is 50 is it not too much. There is no excitement in the novel because we know MC will always win because he is already a God in game

Author did you stop writing this book?

good story ans story progression author keep it up.

This book went from being ok to trash in one chapter. Bad writing author. How can a king allow someone to mass murder and kill everyone in a city. If king allowed mass murder, no other city would be remain in his kingdom. As everyone who is strong can go a rampage on weak individuals.

A very basic power fantasy novel with noting new. Just like any other Novel on this site trash nobles who can get away doing mass murder a dumb and naive MC. I don't know why authors don't think of something new.

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Don't buy purchase privilege chapters from MLB it is unnecessary waste of your hard earned money. He charges one of the highest rates for the privilege chapters on this site and does not even update regularly.

Hi Author just wanted to ask why MC intelligence is not growing. you have established that general who practice magic arts will give more intelligence rather than Vitality or strength because these attributes are less. Now everyone gives these attributes and no one gives intelligence. I am so surprised that the main character can't even get 2 points intelligence from chapter 50 to 214. Are you planning to keep his intelligence at the same level throughout the 10 years of his academy? I just want to ask are planning to change the setting of the book and make from Magic to knight book. Because strength, vitality and agility are essential for Knights not mages