Niggross

Bro, you can't just delete my review telling folks how you stole this story from CloudNineStories : Meddling Giant For shame!

Ye defaq...? Why are people like this? https://www.webnovel.com/book/meddling-giant_25295498805484505

I'm pretty sure you stole this fanfic? https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13801875/30/Meddling-Giant

Why choose vampirism as his preferred immortality? The Enchiridion should have information about the Wishmaster(Prismo), who can grant wishes... Unless you plan to use the wish to make both Mc and Marcy immune to the sun?

I'm kinda with OP, it's a slog to read through these long monotonous descriptions... I like setting the tone and atmosphere as much as the next guy, but not when it slows the pace of the story to a crawl. You're leaving readers with three options, continue reading the descriptions to stay in the story, skip past them to things of substance, or push them to abandon it all together. For me good writing is primarily in how succinctly you can convey your meaning. Plus, for fanfics, in a universe most of your readers have already experienced, describing every nitty gritty detail is unnecessary.

I think itd serve the story better to reveal the choices as they come.theyll be obvious when u see them

I hold votes on my patreon for next fix, starwars has been on there 3 times now, to no avail.

Their prostitute beating stunt is actually cannon xd

Fic's based on a worm cyoa, where getting immorality accidentally through a power is almost comically common.

CYOA was on the hardest difficulty with lowest points, to get any decent powers he had to cripple himself... Of course, our mc never expected for his picks to become reality.