taodaoist

Had an uncontrollable giggle after reading that he farted again after dying.

Is this written by Ai? Conversation and the flow feel so stilted…

This is on fan fic . Net, and I see u have ko-fi page for this, u the real author? Somehow I doubt it…. Was made years ago

Feels lika Ai

Have you never read eragon? Most of all dragons did not have a rider… only a fraction of dragon eggs were given to the riders

Thank you for the chapter, this fic just keeps getting better and better

Wow you really like to repeat yourself… Lost count of how many times you mentioned the weight if the future knowledge he has and how hard and dangerous this is yadda yadda. Please stop it before I go insane Thank you

Mc could tell she was a good person? Like how he thought some “guide” was a good person literally 2-3 chapter earlier? Lol

Am I the only one annoyed that the second half of this chapter was basicly explaining the first half… finding more and more of these useless description of plans that everyone reading fully understood without author explaining in excruciating detail

What do you mean that Rhaenys survived the rebellion? Did you already establish that in your novel cant remember it xD