Planko
Lv15
better than the rest the one you want and the one they want. a basic thot who doesn't take no for an answer. so you better say yes or ill beat you till you do. better not be a thot in front of me. now
2017-07-22 入りましたCanada
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Planko6 years ago発表Strong start, interesting first 100 chapters. At some point though, some characters stop making any logical decisions, the story starts to contradict itself, pace of the story shifts from very slow to way too fast and back to normal. The author seems to invent or put emphasis on certain characters for them to become completely useless or unimportant. Very unsatisfying read, 100% would not recommend. Seriously needs a better editor/spell checking.