Daoist_sword_edge

Just in case you forgot this was translated.

No wild animal fearing for it's life is going to react like this.

Huh?

What a ridiculous statement. Your mc has so many advantages and has so much more skill and experience, yet you measure him against a 6(?) year old child.

In this story the charming and charismatic protagonist charms everyone with his charisma. The charisma he gives off is obvious to everyone from a young age due to his charming personality.

A person has triumphed over something. A person is triumphant after success.

He has magic, how is he dehydrated. The trope is so strong it overwhelmed his ability to summon/create water inside his body.

English rhyme after translation? Very cool.

Love how this looks, hoping for many chapters and regular updates. .

There are literal love heart emoticons in the story. I cannot explain how much of a turn-off that is. My recommendation is not to do that. I gave it 3 stars because I couldn't get past the love hearts, and if the story gets better from there, I haven't read it.