Daoist_Grandmaster

I think the story is going absolutely in the right direction can’t wait for the future fight scenes and the interactions with other characters in universe. I personally would like more explanation in the mcs techniques uniqueness. A great story to read for those who like badass mcs.

I think your story is absolutely great. I especially like the wider world building and greater implications therein. I hope you continue to write consistently and continue pushing boundaries in your writing. Tftc keep up the fantastic work author!

This is shaping up to be one the pinnacles of hp fanfiction I have ever read. Absolutely love the amount of detail paid to the magic and the Mc’s thought process. Looking forward to more.

Noice keep it up! If you keep up the consistency this story will rise fast. Looking forward to more. Can’t wait to see the Mac interact with notable characters in the series.

Absolutely one of the best avatar si’s I’ve read top 3 for sure. Usually bloodbending is not explored much so I hope to see more. Tftc!

I’m enjoying this book a lot. It has a certain refreshing feel after so many generic stories. Hope to see it continued till the end. The only negative is sometimes the translation is iffy. Maybe chatgpt or grammarly could be used if neither is being used at the moment to further enhance the story. Looking forward to more Noice chapters! :)

Its just absolutely awesome. From the characters to world building to even non edgy sounding True Names.This is truly excellent Progression Fantasy. I love this story. Author keep up the fantastic work.