Doa of the Pies
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I'm convinced half of these reviews have 0 reading skills or are straight lying so the story can seem worse than others it's similar to. 5 chapters in the main character is in a shallow village that only has a few skills to level up and his family is poor at that was he expected to gain infinite to choose from? how did he splurge all his system points on 1 skill? It was literally saving his life as he was sick. Did you expect him to seat crippled and I'll? the other one as of chapter 370 past the 330 stated the MC hasn't switched once. He had a disguise for a little bit but even then he never changed his name so what are you talking about? It also has 19 likes of people that apparently didn't read a single sentence. Is the novel bad? No, The Mc is on the smarter side and remains lowkey when he should and shows of when appropriate which I like. He doesn't show off the all powerful technique he got that he'd get killed for but he does show off his alchemy skills to get more upgrade points. He does make mistakes but he's human. Not a pervy Mc as of 400 so bonus points. The worst of this story is that the power system doesn't get translated correctly and realms get mixed around and the 3rd person gets a bit wonky but I've read much much much worse. Genders will get mixed up a bit too but it clears up a bit. Decent novel and great in-between novel. you don't really need to think about what's happening when you come back to it.
Why do authors force incest so hard? I couldn't even get passed the first chapter without having to read the Lil sister is cute 5 times! That made me go check out the reviews and sure enough without the bot number boosters the all the real reviews is about how incest is everywhere and the Mc is a simp for his little sister and considering the Mc is in high-school and barely starting to pass the Lil sis is underage. Stop this gross shit. Oh well their not blood related. The Mc doesn't know that and is hyper fixated on the fact she's cute. 5 times in the first chapter is outrageous.
Yikes.... Where to start. I sat threw this novel til 581. The translation is so bad it confuses characters genders 5times in the same sentence and even the main character gets this treatment. Characters names would change 6 times in the same chapter. It became hard to understand who was who as half the people names changed after chapter 500. A character with a name and was very important to the plot to the time was randomly changed to just red robed. In a organization named Red robes and always described to be wearing red robes. Confusing. The mc was a little jewel at the start. He didn't magically know everything and even has to figure out his own system but holy he'll does he become actually retarded fast. He's been at the same cultivation level for 400 chapters and his excuse his he doesn't want to ruin his perfect foundation when he watches people shoot past his level faster than him with no problems. The Arthur is forcing a dumbass reason to keep the Mc down and I can easily see it keep happening. Now the mcs decision that broke the camels back. The Mc whose thing is he wants to be free to live his life and see his friends safe. So what does he do? Joins the terrorist group that's trying to free another terrorist group and is gonna be hunted down across the world. Dropped immediately since all it took for the Mc to drop his new found morals was a talk no jutsu from someone who has literally tried to kill his friends.