great job,,.................mm..m.m.mm..

where did you get the other chapters?

great work u a really looking forward to seeing where this goes. hope more chapters come soon and happy holidays

.................. great work so far hope it keeps up:) ....................................................................................

hope you get back to writing this soon as its a good story with a great background buildt in. also want to see where the relationships go and if pandora survived.

great story so far, hope to see flourish further. hope whatever is keeping you from continuing ends soon so we can have more chapters in this story.

Really this chapter is blantanly taken from tales of demons and gods

............... very good so far......................... ................. ....... ... .. .. . . . . . . .. . . .. . ........ .. . . .. . . .

Great book so far looking forward to reading much more and seeing hoW long it takes him to realize He has been fed Complete and utter bs from them

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon