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DarthYunshe10mthに返信 Granville4554Thank you very much for your help!
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Lol! A man of culture I see! Thank you for making this mistake into a much positive scenario!
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Thank you for the suggestion!
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It was "The," thank you for covering all possibilities.
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Yep, typo alert, thank you XD!
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Agreed, it sounds much better. Thank you!
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Thank you! I changed it!
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My English teacher would punish me for this mistake hahaha. Thank you very much!
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Changed, thank you!
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Thank you very much!
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Thank you, I always confuse dead and death. Bad habit of mine!
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Thank you! Correction made!
In that moment, as if reading his mind, the Knight of Ren boosted his speed and imbued his attacks with the Force increasing his power exponentially. He was even faster than before and Finn also immersed himself in the Force and parried the blows the best as he could trying to not lose focus and not having negative emotions like fear, knowing that if he were to allow those things, he would be doomed. His opponent used his extra lightsaber to nullify Finn's lightsaber and create opening to take advantage of. Finn started to increase his rythmn in order to cope with the speed and constant barrage of attacks he receive from different angles and blind spots with an absolute concentration. If a normal person could see their fight, they would see just blurry fiigures surrounded by blue and red lights as they moved all over the roof. - DarthYunshe1yrに返信 Granville4554
strength and swung are always difficut word to remember, thank you!
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Strength is always a difficult word for me to remember, thank you!
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you're right! It sounds much better thanks!
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Pirouette. I have this idea of an acrobatic movement in the air. I chose this word over sumersault because for some reason the latter reminds me of a car accident. I don't know any other word which can describe an acrobatic movement XD
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Lol Intro level mistake! Thank you for pointing it out.
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Found it, thank you!
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Thank you!
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