McAwesomedude

It's very easy to use as a army weapon, but using a spear in a duel or a individual level is probably alot harder than most weapons, cuz you can't just rely on the stab and parry in a line formation.

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Author, will there be romance in this book? Don't see the tag, but the picture's content kinda suggests it.

Or even easier solutionto the whole problem of find a partner: no romance. Problem solved and no headaches from trying to make and fit an oc with the mc. Most stories don't need it, it's a reason it often comes across as fluff or almost accessory for many fanfics.

mf gets unlimited water and has the audacity to complain. Even in a rainforest or a tropical beach drinkable water is considerable resource.

Whatever happened to this fellow? Did he keep up with the training after this mum was cured?

IIRC there are plenty of regular Unchida folk going about that aren't ninja, some dont awaken the most broken eye-power in-verse, or just get a single tome. So they are just civilians that work for/with the clan. The manga or anime never really throws around hard numbers about this stuff.

Think this chapter really sells why he is such a bad fit for the naruto setting; despite having years to train, plan and make preparations, at the end of it all, not matter how it's presented, the biggest move he makes in almost 200 chapters to change/improve anything is at it's core an impulsive action. This man was given every opportunity to improve his standing, mentality, mindset and relations, he knew enough to not at least be forced to grind as a genin and throw his life away in the ring for months, for the barest of minimums of power progression. He is impressive for a genin and is soon a Chunni, but that is the best that could be said. This man is not dumb as other reviewers has said relentlessly, no he is far worse; impulsive and tired. At this man's core, he can not sit down an think about his actions beyond what he has just done and his next healing session. By being an tired husk that grasps at any straws, any better way to improve ANYTHING, be it himself or others, he misses them consistently. The future and past might as well not exist to him. He refuses to sit down and think long term plans that fixes any issues. Even just knowing and acting on the broadest of strokes in this universe is a highway to endless opportunities. Something this man will never do. Also, that fact that this story got a romance tag, i legit pity that unfortunate woman or man.

Based on the average people's circumstance, i'm betting on a 50-60 'life-expectancy'. Sure, normal folk have potentially for a 80-life-span, but ya know how life is in tough times are.

Not to be that guy, but instead of writing 'The Dragon King's wife...', just write the mother or something. So far the vampire aspect is the current focus, being the last boss and this being his flashback, the fact there is a 'dragon king' means nothing until this point, so having his title go before hers (vampire queen), which has actual contextual importance or whatnot makes no sense.