Ashywar

The grammar is not just bad but very bad. It makes reading the story unbearable. Also, there is too much repeatation of the same thing again and again while the system and leveling up makes no sense. Overall good effort but not worth time and money.

The raw doesn't work can you share the web address

Sikkim is also an independent country at this time

The story initially was very good and very interesting but now the MC has become just another version of Orochimaru. He doesn't have any morals and he has the same goal as him moreover the story is being stre tched unnecessarily with filler after filler with Plot still at the Chunin exam arc. The Naruto manga ended in 700 chapters. This has now become a boring story that you leave in your library and read when it's finished if ever.

No need for Chatgpt

very stupid plot point. If all SHIELD agents have this then how was Clint able to hide when he got taken over by Loki. There are even more examples but this was just stupid and lazy.

Everyone in the class is 5-6 years old. Do you even remember what you were like at that time in your life. I also don't understand how everyone is like propaganda is bad. It's normal to want to work for betterment of the society and people you grow up with. Those who don't are know as PSYCHOPATHS.

You are only going back 3 days. Not much difference if you train.

Its not about sounding better, its about using a language properly.

initially the story started out good and was very interesting but now after 400+ chapters it's become dull and boring. There has been a new villain introduced whose existence doesn't make sense with the restrictions he has been operating in moreover the plot feels forced. I will probably check in 100 more chapters if there has been any improvement but presently it's not worth spending your money on.