Bodhi

Is it really that hard for WN authors to not be creeps?

Cringe. Isn’t he like 16

Cringe

Great change of pace compared to other Fanfics. Basically, MC isn’t a piece of shit.

This is a great way of showing why or how TAO knew of Leon. Nice.

Cringe dialogue.

Cringe

Great start. Recent chapters obliterated any interest I had in this novel. Recent chapters has turned this into a dogshit shounen-type thing with friends betraying him and him going all naruto on them. Terrible.

I mean. He’s not wrong. Tag the story as harem if there’s a harem. Doesn’t matter if you “think” it’s not a harem because he doesn’t “love” them all. It’s a harem.