Aminya

OC's are only really a issue when writers flood a story with them. making it hard to keep focus on what's going on

personally i find Massive harems a detraction from all but smut stories. anything more then like 3 or 4 girls to a harem makes the stories progress very bogged down with 2 many factors that can lead to writing oneself into a corner followed by story being dropped.

personally iIwould of went with the 50 random draws, especially since Jon's whining about the drawn cards being better than him

and again we are confronted by Lord Cliff-sama

ty for your work hope you continue

just woke up in a New world doesn't have a clue what's going on. The library sounds like a legitimate solution to get free information and Internet access.

agreed massive harem fics generally get so bogged down that the fic either dies or just turns into a smut snippet collection

agreed

thank you for the chapter and I hope to see more updates

give us the head of the land owner ..... and we will give you back villagers a b and c.. seems like a fair trade right?