GhostXYZ

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10710606/2/A-Demon-Lord-s-Hero this is where it was taken from *****************************************************************

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cant give more than 3* since it ain't yours ******************************************************* raw name: 送葬，转生魔族怎么办 you can also find a machine translation at www.fanmtl.com *******************************************************

It is an interesting story quite the change from how the usual Chinese garbage novels go as this time the story starts with the protagonist already at the peak and the system is mostly comic relief. I cannot truly give an much of an impression until I read more than 25 chapters, as almost all Chinese novels tend to go downhill pretty fast, but for the little that is currently translated it is a fun to read novel. For those wanting the raw: 我都成封号斗罗了，才来系统?

The more I read the more I think he is high when writing.

It isn't that your story is bad, in fact from a grammatical pov it's done quite well - at least compared to most of the garbage on this website with authors writing their synopsis with "english my not language main" as an excuse to be able to turn the every word in a sentence into a fc.kin anagram along with the location of said words, all the while having their characters suffer from some form of gender dysphoria with how often they switch pronouns - so no my main issue is how your main character seems to switch constantly from more formal to childish to some form of 'hood' variations in both thought and dialog, resulting in some parts being written well some being ripped out of of children's essay and in some he feels like he's playing the godfather. So without any intention to insult (and if I do so by mistake I apologize, please do not take it to heart), but are you high when you're writing?

If you actually want to read this garbage do it here: https://www.mtlnovel.com/people-in-pirates-i-can-copy-any-talent/ At least this one is actually understandable.

So he's not chinese, those are all handsome (about every 3 paragraphs):)))

"I couldn't help but find..."

Aaaand......it just turned to garbage