Pillsaint

grammar and sentence structire makes the story unreadable.

Fun but the last part of this chapter was stolen from a A Demon Lord's Hero

I cant understand what level did he reach in cultivation in the xianxia world

love your story really happy that your writing has improved.It would be great if you could get an editor, I still find a lot of stupid mistakes like missed words or misspelled words. I believe this would improve the story reading experience by quite a lot. Thanks for the great story and keep writing.