What kind of Superman is this? Anyone with a bit of strength can make him feel pain? Besides, why does he patrol? Superman can hear everything happening in the city without the need to patrol. It's just one city, and his super hearing is much stronger.

Being in House of the Dragon without being a Targaryen is kind of boring. They don't have real power to bring about change unless you come up with something strange outside of canon. That's why it's better set in the era of Game of Thrones.

I don't understand, if you make Ash a better trainer, why is he still as goofy as he is in the series? Isn't he supposed to be a different person in Ash's body? Why does he always fall for the same nonsense?

I hope he doesn't end up with Ron as his only friend like in the canon. Ron is a terrible friend, always jealous and annoying. Or at least write him as a good friend.

I don't understand why he lets his uncle talk to him like that. I get that he doesn't want to be too violent, but reminding his uncle of his place would be necessary. Otherwise, he's being stupid, and you didn't portray the MC as stupid.

What si take the blood?

You never said what he added to his lineage. It's killing me with curiosity.

Correct the part about the pounds, it's crazy. Giving him 70 billion is a lot and not exaggerated.

The chapters are too short, almost nothing happens in a single chapter.

The novels you've written but aren't on Webnovel, are you going to upload them here someday? Or are they only available for purchase?

Just please don't repeat these themes; they're uncomfortable to read, and I don't read fanfic to feel uncomfortable or annoyed. Besides, there are very few Hollywood fanfics that aren't abandoned, so I hope you continue and make it more entertaining.

Aren't you going to upload the new series of President Stark to this page?

Not to mention the fact that he knows his past, it's not good for the kid's career either. We all know how it would be if an actor had those kinds of movies when they were young... I'm going to skip these chapters because they're uncomfortable and unnecessary. If this theme becomes frequent, I'm going to drop the novel.

I find it strange that the father decides to make a short film with that kind of theme. There are a thousand different ideas to showcase talent.

How is he going to buy Marvel? I get DC because it could exist as comics, but Marvel? Seriously? It's a minor detail, but it really makes it look very silly to exist. You know there's something called verisimilitude, right?

Thanks for the chapter. Are you going to start uploading chapters more frequently or just whenever you have time? Because I almost forgot where the story was.

It just felt weird to me that Dumbledore would take out his wand when he's alone with a minor after what you said.

How does time work in the world of Minecraft? Because if they age a month while they're there, in 9 real months, they'll have lived 3 years

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I loved it, I hope you don't abandon it and it lasts for hundreds of chapters. It's a shame there are only 6 chapters now.