Daoist_Dan

Yup, that's the exact problem. Put a JJK system in MHA to tell a story about being a game dev/mangaka/book writer/whatever instead.

And nope. Came for a gacha battle fic with JJK powers in MHA. Not a trash "I steal copyright and pretend I'm somebody after reincarnating" fic.

The people who care about this are the weirdos who were trying to cancel Mr beast before he deserved it. Oh no, he got people cataract surgeries and paid to have wells dug in Africa. Shut him down immediately, he made videos about it.

The Stain viewpoint is garbage tbh. I don't give a shit if a firefighter is in it for their personal ethics or whatever bullshit. Get me out of the fire, that's all I care about. If giving them a profit motive works even better. Pull that lever. Make people be saved faster. If this motivates you then let's talk about how the government is screwing you.

Ngl, the story is chewing over these early scenes a bit too much. It's obsessed with blood status to the point it's coming up every 10-20 paragraphs and it's over-describing and explaining stuff in every new scene. The latter can add atmosphere and be good for immersion, but when you become ready for a moment to be done paragraphs ago it's immersion breaking. I'm bothering to say all this because if I reviewed right now this would be the critical portion of it for sure.

This is the third time I've noticed this story talking in circles. It'll start out as one thing and then become the opposite. He was criticizing the half-bloods for not noticing the badge change here. Now it's the purebloods who don't pay attention.

What did she do

Unmarried woman.