kessu91

Why the F would he do this on Coruscant the future seat of the Empire? He has zero plans for order 66 and has done no preparations for when he becomes a fugitive. Instead hes spending all his money to buy S in the worst place possible...

Yeah... Fits the cringe 12 year old BS he keeps pulling that when something doesn't go his way he instantly starts acting like some pathetic B.

His entire personality is a weakness. The cringe B needs to seriously get a reality check...

Ah yes. In the midst of battle you will just sit down and start a 10 minute chant while keeping eye contact with your opponent who's throwing spells at you and rising to the air at 67m/s after you broke the stonewall they transfigured to mount the broom safely...

What math are we using to arrive here? The number of students in Hogwarts was around a 1000 during Harry's school years and they regularly live over 200 even 300 years. Hogsmeade alone most likely had 3000 poeple...

Your MC is beginning to sound more and more like someone who wanted to commit self delete without it being perceived as such... Or do you actually think this is how people who do extreme sports act normally?

....so MC just forgot the dark wizard was in the forest as well right after realizing something is causing everyone to lose control of their emotions and he didn't even bother to check where that dark wizard was after? Seriously?

Why is he turning into a Stephen Strange/Tony Stark hybrid? Its cringe as F... The moment he went to learn magic its like a switch flicked and his personality just changed completely with literally nothing to actually explain why it changed...

......can you add dark or villain or evil to the tags? Since he clearly could care less about his so called "friends"? They don't have a F relic of the Creator on them to escape if something goes wrong after all....

Oh great. Shame he didn't feel like sharing what he suspected of the Dog. I'm sure nothing will go wrong entering the dreams of people who might be corrupted by a F God...