LuciferGrindelwald

I think Harry is way too naive, it war people die and people get killed if you can't kill then don't fight and what use is it carrying dead weight into a battle. the whole thing is just dumb. after seeing all the devastation Morgan caused he is still hesitant to kill in order to prevent it from happening again? that's supremely foolish

I honestly love the story it's really good but it's repetitive, the same story every chapter. you have been on Hogwarts reaction to this and nothing about the outside worlds reaction to it... its's the same chapter as the last several chapters only different wording and scenes... please move it along

I'm honestly getting tired of the same story over and over again it's like each chapter is a repetition of the what we already know from the earlier chapters. Please can we move it along?

I love the book , it's not too slow, explains clearly and informative

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in front of absolute power all schemes are rendered completely obsolete

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+1 for Margery

Good one, I really love this, I was about to give up when you hadn't posted a new chapter

the story in itself is not original since it's a fanfiction therefore elements of the canon needs to be in it... besides he's really good and I love how the story is progressing. if you feel you can do better then write your own version let's see