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The_Pen

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I am me.

2017-08-17 入りましたGlobal
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen6mth
    コメント

    This arc ruined it for me. Seems like the author just randomly killed him and ruined the system too. Never liked quest systems and works traveling. Just turned into an average power fantasy now.

    Ch 443 Unexpected turn of events
    altalt
    Strongest Mage with the Lust system
    ファンタジー · Blizzard54k
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen8mth
    コメント

    The main character is so dumb. Also it seems like you killed off the parents just to remove any attachments he might have.He can read and write, and should be good at basic stuff like maths, so him becoming a farmer makes no sense.Also the 7 years of no quests is more that you hadn't planned for that long, so you made a literal quest reward not even be a reward, since it's just his supervisor in a box...Seems like you are just writing with no direction or planning.

    Ch 6 CHAPTER 5
    altalt
    RISE OF EROS
    ファンタジー · Mauricio_Negrete
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen8mth
    に返信 Yikuro

    Nuke is way too strong. A hydrogen bomb like the Tsar Bomba can literally wipe out many cities. you can literally nuke the city next to him, and it would be too late for him to do anything. he would just be vaporized into nothing before he realized that the nuke had gone off.

    [You were even confident that even if a nuclear bomb was sent to Lynn and your location, as long as you prepared beforehand, your power was enough to defend from the explosion and radiation of a nuclear bomb.]
    altalt
    World Travel Simulator System In Modern Society
    ファンタジー · ShadowKatake
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen8mth
    コメント

    Rip, the time travel basically ruined it.

    Ch 13 Secret Basement
    altalt
    Zombie Apocalypse: Creation
    ファンタジー · IPI
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen8mth
    発表

    An interesting story, it's strange that it hasn't had that many views. Although it isn't the highest quality, I appreciate the effort it takes to write. And in this case, the story is slightly different to what we normally get from webnovel.

    altalt
    Heiko- Into the parallel worlds
    ファンタジー · RYK
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen8mth
    コメント

    This chapter felt like a fever dream.

    Ch 6 Chapter 4- Familiar yet unfamiliar
    altalt
    Heiko- Into the parallel worlds
    ファンタジー · RYK
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen8mth
    コメント

    Seems like an interesting story. Can't wait to read the rest.

    Ch 1 ???
    altalt
    Heiko- Into the parallel worlds
    ファンタジー · RYK
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen8mth
    に返信 xLeafx

    There is literally a tool called Prometheus for monitoring application containers...

    It took Sarah a month to finally finish making everything ready and for them to start operation. The reason it took that long is because she was dealing with two massive projects at once, the acquisition of the law firm, and the hiring and training of new employees. As for the server farm for new product development, she decided to postpone it a little until everything is stabilized and in order.
    altalt
    Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
    SF · Agent_047
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen9mth
    コメント

    This is just AI generated gibberish now. Terrible to read. Like eating a soup with too many ingredient.

    Ch 35 Moment of truth
    altalt
    The Eternal Family
    ファンタジー · FamishedGod
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen1yr
    コメント

    Not a fan of the merging memories. Seems like it was only done to give him objectives to complete.

    Ch 75 Memories
    altalt
    Strongest Mage with the Lust system
    ファンタジー · Blizzard54k
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen1yr
    に返信 Psan

    I agree. This story has so many inconsistencies. He only has one friend, and is antisocial, and even the friend he has he treats badly and doesn't care about her feelings. why would such a person agree to be a leader of a random village. Moreover a village that tried to kidnap him to use as a sacrifice. And in under 24 hours of even appearing in the planet. He literally got the power to travel at the speed of light. He can go to any place in the planet in a second.

    Ch 12 Give me One week!
    altalt
    Reincarnated with an Analysis system.
    ファンタジー · Kirito_K5
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen1yr
    に返信 The_Pen

    Also he blames the people looking at him when he's walking when he literally says he is staring at them while walking. I wouldn't be surprised that he was being bullied more for being super creepy rather than just having an F rating.

    Ch 10 Benjamin Kaminski (1)
    altalt
    BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM
    ファンタジー · PilgrimJagger
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen1yr
    コメント

    this book would actually be good if the MC wasn't a psycho and if the author didn't name everything so strangely. quite a lot of the names just seem like you bashed the keyboard.

    Ch 10 Benjamin Kaminski (1)
    altalt
    BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM
    ファンタジー · PilgrimJagger
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen1yr
    コメント

    Why does he act so much like a child, and keep on randomly stuttering? Really ruins the immersion.

    Ch 40 Leaving Home
    altalt
    SPELLCRAFT: Reincarnation Of A Magic Scholar
    ファンタジー · Magecrafter
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen2yr
    に返信 Egyptionbooties

    Normally that would be true, but in your system, quests can give stats directly, so it no longer matters. Instead, completing as many quests as possible at a high rank matters more.

    この章は削除されました。
    altalt
    RIPrip
    書籍·文学 · Egyptionbooties
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen2yr
    コメント

    Dude has lots of points and isn't even using them. No wonder his wisdom is so low.

    この章は削除されました。
    altalt
    RIPrip
    書籍·文学 · Egyptionbooties
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen2yr
    コメント

    Why are they together in the first place? He no longer has normal emotions, so doesn't make sense.

    Ch 4 3rd Move | Elimination
    altalt
    Inspired Inventor (Tensura AU)
    アニメ·コミックス · unit_201
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen2yr
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    Mmost of this doesn't make sense, since he has AOE. if he needs money, he can just create bricks of gold and sell them. why does he need to buy shares then? Also, since he can create the potion, why isn't he creating more that can increase his mana reserves. AOE can literally make any thing you can imagine. so if you imagine a potion that can increase your mana pool, it will make it.

    Ch 1 Chapter 5
    altalt
    Harry Potter : Arc of Embodiment ( Rewrite )
    映画 · Fire_Phoenix_02
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen2yr
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    The MC is so wierd. Obsessed with music and thinks underground fighting is a good way to make money, when he has a system which he can buy things from.

    Ch 3 Couple of Days later
    altalt
    New Debauchery life with system [+18]
    アニメ·コミックス · Belteragon
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  • The_Pen
    The_Pen2yr
    コメント

    Wwhy is the MC so stupid? As soon as I saw the invasion happening I would have summoned the golem and just dog a tunnel to escape. Wth would you run out in the open.

    Ch 36 A Lesson on Cruelty! II
    altalt
    My Idle Gaming System
    ゲーム · Adui
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