Rak

caught me off guard

a good start, he is powering up quite quickly but has a basic system. give it a try review as of ch 20

what is she a dog

also noel is like 24 years old or something. thats what i remember, i maybe wrong

it's cool thing what Ur doing but i would also like to see the cons of the new system .maybe because things are progressing so fast they don't see issues .or anything .just saying bad about old system won't make sense without understanding the bad of new system too

this chapter would have been more emotional if we did not know that leon is alive. just putting it before telling us he is alive would make it more emotional. but i guess if u dont then people will bring pitchforks

i like it. the mc here is not trying to play the system tho and is acting more like a teenager instead of adult. but its good. give it a try