Youth warriors

I enjoyed this story, actually, I like the character's change for her friend and being sorry for her the most, I usually read stories like fiction and fantasy, and this suits my taste, so thank you.

Focus on the writing, on the treatment of the topic, on the characters, on the storyline, on the research, on the facts, and so on. Don't make judgment calls about the author's faith, intelligence, relationships, parenting skills, parentage, or whatever.