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Yokai Bloodlines

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"In a universe ruled by ancient gods, humanity faces existential threats. As protagonists Noya, Yoshi, and Kai navigate a world of horrors, they confront their destinies. Battling demonic forces, they uncover truths about their own powers and the dark origins of their foes. Sacrifices are made, alliances tested, and in the end, redemption found. Yet, a lingering mystery remains: the enigmatic figure Yamada, driven by an inexplicable hatred. As the dust settles, questions linger, setting the stage for an epic second season where secrets will be revealed and destinies fulfilled."

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Chapter 1The Unwanted Protagonist

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___Continued___

The Universe exploded. A Dark Energy Inheritor, smirks towards the Universe's Explosion, and shouts, Now there is no hatred or filth left, nothing not a single piece of greed or happiness is left. He cried, saying, No one even mother and father. WHY, didn't they listen to my predictions?!!

this paragraph was written in the ancient manuscripts of Hanrogka.

 

A Monk asked, "Master, why is this manuscript empty after this paragraph?".

The Master replied, "This Manuscript was written by the Future Seeing God, Angelon. It was said, that after writing this paragraph he died of mysterious reasons. Some of my teachers told me, that he took his own life, and some said, he was killed by another entity who destroyed the universe. But all of these statements are just myths."

 

The Monk was shocked, he asked, "Is there an entity having great powers that can even kill a god?".

"Yes, there are many", The Master Replied with a creepy smirk.

Amidst their conversation, A Mysterious Person came out of the sheaths of wind. The Master was glued to his place after seeing his appearance. He came towards the Master and pointed his fingers towards his head. The Master said his last words, "Don't Think that I created only 1 clone." The Master's Head was blasted and blood spread everywhere.

The Monk was blanked, by this sudden attack. A Blood-covered hand with shiny metallic blades came and snatched the manuscripts from the severed hand of the Monk. The Monk was shocked and terrified. He tried to fight back, but couldn't do so, when he found that hand is of a muscular entity with red shiny eyes, and an oni mask with black kimono. The monk felt helpless realizing his death would be the only outcome if he fought back.

So he handed the manuscripts and ran away.....

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Review and suggestions for improvement:Strengths:Engaging start: The opening lines quickly pull the reader in with your positive mood and anticipation of returning home.Vivid imagery: You paint clear pictures of the scenery with details like "white mountains," "cows grazing grass," and "canola fields shining in the broad daylight."Intriguing mystery: The sudden appearance of the ruined village and the staring girl with a ripped face introduces a sense of suspense and begs the question: what happened there?Internal conflict: Your feeling of shame, even though you haven't done anything wrong, adds depth and complexity to your character.Possible areas for improvement:Show, don't tell: Instead of saying you were feeling happy, describe the actions or thoughts that show your happiness.Deepen character development: Tell us more about your relationship with Major X, your family and friends, and why you feel ashamed. What happened in the past?Develop the setting: Briefly describe the ruined village and its surroundings. What does it smell like? How does it feel underfoot?Explore Yumiko's character: Instead of just her appearance, give us hints about her personality, background, and maybe the emotions she's feeling.Build tension: The mystery feels introduced a bit abruptly. Consider planting some earlier clues or hints to build anticipation.Ending: The excerpt ends abruptly, leaving the reader with more questions than answers. Give us a sense of direction or a next step to keep the story moving.Additional tips:Consider giving your story a title that reflects its themes or central element.Think about your target audience and adjust the tone and style accordingly.Use strong verbs and evocative language to draw the reader into your world.Proofread carefully for typos and grammatical errors.Overall, this is a promising start to a story with intriguing elements. By developing your characters, setting, and mystery further, you can create a truly captivating narrative. Keep writing and refining your work!

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