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Yin Formulation(old version)

Eastern Fantasy
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What is Yin Formulation(old version)

WebNovel で公開されている、Shifty_DaoistMage の作者が書いた Yin Formulation(old version) の小説を読んでください。My fellow readers, this is an announcement. I will be participating in the new WPC with this novel. There will be some touch ups and changes done to make the new novel better. Do search up Yin Formula...

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My fellow readers, this is an announcement. I will be participating in the new WPC with this novel. There will be some touch ups and changes done to make the new novel better. Do search up Yin Formulation(Remastered) for the new version of this novel. Just tried to remaster this and I realised there is a hell lot of plot holes. Might have to stop updating for a few days to rewrite entire chapters. Haha, would you Guess it, but I’m back to writing. I think

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Forgetful
ForgetfulLv4Forgetful

Hello, My name is ‘Forgetful’ and I’m not very particular when it comes to my novels. I find that this novel’s readability is definitely a notch above most Originals, and the grammar isn’t too shabby. This is just me but it wouldn’t hurt delve into the MC’s thoughts. Someone whose thoughts are growing darker won’t just act like a douche(example), but will also experience the world differently from others. A cultist wouldn’t have the same thoughts on a sacrificial than a normal Joe, and also wouldn’t have the some behaviors. Heck, some crazies see/hears things that only exist in their own little world. With love, Forgetful

kenringdomstorybro
kenringdomstorybroLv1kenringdomstorybro

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TrueDawn
TrueDawnLv13TrueDawn

It's a pretty good novel, though it could use more updates to really tell the narrative. Then again, I've only read like 10 chapters, but it was enough for me to create a world in my mind. I hope this novel gets more chapters.

balubalubalu666
balubalubalu666Lv4balubalubalu666

Well as far as I could see, the story is not at bad, just that our author kun needs a little improvement in writing. The story has several Chinese names which are hard to remember. But still it doesn't affect the story much. Hope the author continues his work and stability, and hits 100 chapters in the least.

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