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Within a dungeons grasp

作者: Snitzfoam
Fantasy
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What is Within a dungeons grasp

WebNovel で公開されている、Snitzfoam の作者が書いた Within a dungeons grasp の小説を読んでください。Branch And Grenade are two teenagers living in the world of Dem-one, Branch is useless and doesn’t make enough money to make himself useful. Grenade is incredibly useful and everyone likes her cause s...

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Branch And Grenade are two teenagers living in the world of Dem-one, Branch is useless and doesn’t make enough money to make himself useful. Grenade is incredibly useful and everyone likes her cause she is useful, they live together by the way. Oh yeah and monsters, lots of em, they wanna kill everyone, but Branch ain’t bout to let that happen cause he’s a big boy with a big boy knife and a typo to control them monsties. STRETCH GOALS: 50 power stones in one week= some extra chapters in the next week. 100 power stones in one week= holy wow that’s a lot... umm, how about a world AND story update every day for a week? Yeah that sounds good.

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Maya. . . A young woman of 20 years old, full of dreams, she and Amaya's childhood friend, they studied together, and went to college together. Maia is a middle-class girl, her parents moved to another state after she graduated from college. . . Lucca, a 30-year-old powerful man, CEO of the largest North American telecommunications company, he became CEO after his parents died in a car accident, him and Amaya's brother, her and everything in his life, what's left of her family, when Lucca was a teenager, Maia would always go to his house, to stay with Amaya, her mother Rebecca made Maia her daughter, Lucca couldn't stand that girl, whenever she went to his house, he found a way to go somewhere else, he could not stand that girl , skinny , with crooked teeth , he thought she was horrible , and whenever he was home , Maia did everything to get his attention, and that made him more and more irritated. The years went by and he went to another state to go to college and study to one day take his father's place in the company, until the accident happened and he was forced to return and take his father's place. . . What Lucca didn't expect was to come back and meet the new Maia. A beautiful woman, but doesn't give a shit about him, proud, difficult, who will tease him in any way she can. . . And to make matters worse, she goes to work every day as his secretary. Lucca, the powerful and very obsessive CEO, doesn't feel sorry for anyone, he doesn't measure efforts to get people out of his way. Maia was in love with Lucca, but after he ran away so much, she got tired, she is a mature woman, proud, very efficient in her work. . . Now the game has turned. . . Will Lucca be able to win Maia's heart? But what Lucca did not expect was the Russian Capo Nicollas Dmitriev to appear in Maia's life. . .

Erica_Almeida · 歴史
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Eternal Bonds of Jade and Silver

In a world where opulent gatherings and powerful families intertwine, "Eternal Bonds of Jade and Silver" unfolds the story of Lou Shayne and Huang Jun, two souls drawn together by destiny. At a young age, Lou Shayne, an enigmatic beauty with a facade of emotionlessness, crosses paths with Huang Jun, a silver-haired scion of a prestigious business dynasty. Their initial meeting sparks a connection that defies time and expectations, setting the stage for a lifelong bond. As they navigate their separate paths, their friendship blossoms through heartfelt letters that traverse continents. Shayne's culinary expertise becomes a testament to her unwavering dedication, while Jun's business acumen mirrors the legacy he's destined to inherit. Through their words, they nurture a connection that transcends distance, becoming each other's pillars of support and inspiration. However, tragedy strikes when Shayne's family falls victim to a mysterious ambush during a business trip to China. Amidst the wreckage, Shayne and her brother Lin are the sole survivors, leaving behind a shattered world and unanswered questions. The news reverberates across borders, reaching Jun and shaking the foundation of his world. Unable to contact Shayne in the aftermath, Jun is left with memories, a void, and a heart heavy with worry. The echoes of their shared moments and whispered promises sustain him through the uncertainty, while he clings to the hope that their connection remains unbroken. With time passing and the weight of their separation becoming more palpable, Shayne and Jun's unwavering bond is put to the test. They must navigate not only the challenges of their personal ambitions and family legacies but also the shadows of a past that threatens to tear them apart. "Eternal Bonds of Jade and Silver" is a tale of love that defies distance and destiny. In a world where family names hold power, and alliances are forged through tradition, Shayne and Jun prove that the strongest bond of all is one that transcends time, distance, and adversity. Through the whispers of the heart, they navigate the intricacies of friendship, love, and resilience, proving that even in the face of life's harshest trials, the ties that bind their hearts are unbreakable.

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Personal preference: I like stories where the author uses his creativity and creates stuff; like, the mc's ability to sing and tame monsters. Reading on, I remembered that I have a problem(minor, like really small) with western-styled names. I feel my inner self flinching every moment I read a novel with them. Back to the novel, I really like seeing how the characters of a novel look like; how their voices sound like; how their bodies look like(are they lean, fat, bulky? Or just a plain stick-figure since they're children?) And yes, I noticed a major problem in the first two chapters. I mean, you didn't mention if they were in a modern, or ancient world, right? And in the next chapter(c2) the protagonist mentions the end-boss systems of games. Like, I don't know if this is confusing to other readers, but this just jolted me out of my immersion. But I thought that maybe, this is a modern world, otherwise how'd they name grenade 'grenade' even if the names in this world are based on something called 'typos'(I applaud your creativity, dude) [Personal Opinion: this story feels like a fun one, but more of the lighter ones. I have an idea, it'll also make the mc more interesting; kill grenade!] Well, after chapter three I now know that the world is a modern one. I don't know if I've missed something, but you haven't mentioned the ages of the characters yet, have you? (God this is confusing) "Hey Branch?" "Yeah?" "Do you mind if I sleep in your bed tonight?" ( ͡o ͜ʖ ͡o) ( ͡o ͜ʖ ͡o)( ͡o ͜ʖ ͡o)( ͡o ͜ʖ ͡o)( ͡o ͜ʖ ͡o)( ͡o ͜ʖ ͡o)( ͡o ͜ʖ ͡o) Anyways, onto the next chapter - Ohhhhh, now I understand the naming. Annd yeah, the world chapters can be allocated to an auxiliary volume in inkstone.webnovel.com Anyways. Good. Grammar - 4.5/5 = Easy to understand, no typos, simple vocabulary. Extraordinary in webnovel.com, mediocre in RRL Characters - 2.5/5 = I don't know how they look like; neither do I know what their age is. And they all feel somewhat lifeless to me(which is an inherent flaw of the first person view system, I agree) Describe everything more would help. Story - 5/5 = Author is creative and everything is new. Story development - 4/5 = Slow, and light paced. I don't like the types of dungeon stories that are too fast or slow, so I think mine is biased a bit. Word Building - No comment. I like how you mentioned the future villain in the first ten chapters. Zhe author'z skillz - 5/5 = is noob maybe, in creating stories; which I've noticed after seeing the various problems. Is this hareeeeem? Anyways, I'd like my review swap, thanks.

Afternoone
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FIRST!! Great concept, the mc has an interesting ability, the ability to tame monsters by singing I think, he only made one sleep on c5. The chapters are quite short but overall, it's a fun read with great potential.

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daoist_om
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It's a good novel, Author writes dialogues very well but he needs to improve on the description and very short chapters help pace well but he should write a bit more so that readers can be completely involved in the story

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