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Wife is Delicious- a tale of chasing romance

作者: stella2138
Historical Romance
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What is Wife is Delicious- a tale of chasing romance

WebNovel で公開されている、stella2138 の作者が書いた Wife is Delicious- a tale of chasing romance の小説を読んでください。A wild, teenage heiress tricks her parents into letting her fly to S-Korea for a concert. But who could tell that half-way the plane would crash, that she'd be summoned to another dimension? Who can e...

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A wild, teenage heiress tricks her parents into letting her fly to S-Korea for a concert. But who could tell that half-way the plane would crash, that she'd be summoned to another dimension? Who can explain the new system that she has to host? Who could tell she'd fall in love with a demon and chase him all the way to marriage? And who could tell her that, the same love would break her? Would she allow that same love to heal her wounds?

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BAJJ
BAJJLv13BAJJ

In my own honest opinion, the whole concept is cute. It's engaging in its own way and I actually understood where this is going. However, I cannot continue reading this no matter how good the idea was because of the way it was written. It lacks emotion and details. (though I'm no any better) but still, I advice that you work more about the quality of your chapter instead of rushing it because the premise is really good and it would be a waste if it won't improve.

stella2138
stella2138作者stella2138

as the author, it isn't too bad to rate my own book. I give my book 5 stars because,of all the books I've written,this is the best of them all. I sincerely hope that you'll like it and recommend to others. to show your support pls do vote, comment or write me an honest review. thankyou

great_gamer
great_gamerLv5great_gamer

It is very interesting story, and the plot is promising and one of kind. I recommend everyone to checking it out — you won't regret this! Keep it up the good work author-sama!

MissJeba
MissJebaLv11MissJeba

this book so far quite good for me but not very interesting. it is fun to read maybe it is slow update. i hope author can update regularly. i still wait for the male character and female character to interact or growing together. i still waiting for their spark. overall, it is nice and i hope author dont give up and improve your skill and your book will be top. good luck!

Haven_Sky
Haven_SkyLv14Haven_Sky

FL& her fox seriously drive me bonkers but I guess in a good way kinda! Funny when our fox shows clear signs of raging jealousy an still can me utterly clueless on his feelings for his 'master'. But such can be said bout our FL too ahaha

DoctorZer0
DoctorZer0Lv3DoctorZer0

I have no idea what is going on, but I love it. Truly unique. I am also enjoying all the comments in the book - the author get's in some pretty interesting discussions. I've added it to my library!

Jada_Jessie
Jada_JessieLv4Jada_Jessie

The cover of the book catches the attention of a reader. Making the book special since it’s book cover represents the main idea of the story. While the cover does this it’s also tells a little bit of the story through the picture. Mainly using non - verbal communication to talk their audience. You have perfect spelling grammar. All of your sentences are well developed and has good structure. The story you are writing is a original. I am always to excited to read the next chapters to find out what happens next. Your book is awesome and please continue writing.

KyphrAce18
KyphrAce18Lv5KyphrAce18

Woah the synopsis is soooo good and interesting 😊😊😉 Hahaha and it's obvious that this novel is a comedy one too😊😊😉😂 Can't wait to read this weeee😊😊😉😂

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Daoist_Food
Daoist_FoodLv4Daoist_Food

The rate of updates is very stable, and I love your flow of writing. The synopsis really captured me and the plot seems very interesting. Good luck and great job!

Haven_Sky
Haven_SkyLv14Haven_Sky

Get seriously worried when your FL describes her new body as she straight out barfed 🤮 Then the farting thing...?? That's just nasty& soo not moment present in time to just let one rip😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

GoD_SovereignJ
GoD_SovereignJLv6GoD_SovereignJ

Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.

Dadumdada
DadumdadaLv6Dadumdada

Ohhhhhhh 😳😳😳😳😳 could this...could it be another great novel making ta appearance🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩love💖💖💖😊😊😊❤️❤️❤️so gonna haveta read this story. I AM SO BERRY INTERESTED in this!!!!😍😍😍

RedSonia
RedSoniaLv15RedSonia

I like the story, it's interesting and funny. Some parts made me laugh out loud. English could use some improvement, as well as adding details and emotions. It can only make the experience of the readers better. Overall, good work author! Keep writing! Keep improving!

midnight_bloom
midnight_bloomLv13midnight_bloom

The plot is promising and unique. It looks quite interesting with a mix of contemporary pop culture in the first chapters. Sentence structure is quite short and simple yet looks fun to read.

Gold_Paper_Crane
Gold_Paper_CraneLv10Gold_Paper_Crane

I saw that you have received a lot of feedback to improve. I will not discuss that. I think you got potential here. I am also a new writer and I understand what the challenges here. I think you're getting there, it's great. Keep on moving forward! I think the characters are great. The world was also shaped nicely. Thanks for introducing this novel to me!

LordSputnik
LordSputnikLv13LordSputnik

Honest Review This one is hard for me to review as the genre is not one I normally read. I'll be a little generous with the stars. Overall though, you have a good story and if you can flesh out the grammar issues, many of the other issues will disappear as well if you ask me. The Good: Interesting plot, the characters have good chemistry and the FL doesn't annoy me which is a big plus. The Bad: The grammar... oh the grammar... I recommend Grammarly or getting an editor. I've probably misinterpreted some of the things that have been written, but I can't say for sure. Check your facts/units sometimes. You once gave a woman 100 inch hips, that's HUGE! Did you maybe mean 100 cm? 100 cm is much more reasonable. The Neutral: Short chapters... very short chapters, this breaks immersion in my opinion, but that is just my opinion. The structure is painful to read for me. One short sentence and a line break followed by another short sentence and a line break without grouping common sentences into paragraphs makes it look like just a lot of lines of text.

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Kamlyn
KamlynLv14Kamlyn

I just found this story and through the synopsis, it seems interesting. The kind of genre I like is romance, transmigration and it really sounds good. I will definitely gonna give it a try because all the novels I am reading are ongoing. So I need to find some more. And I guess I found one.

valeriex
valeriexLv4valeriex

Hi there!! I’ve read a few chapters of your story so far and am pleased with it. Nice cover art as well to attract your readers. I also agree with all the reviews on grammar. Perhaps you can try grammarly? It helps edit and spots grammar mistakes which some were simple I spotted in the story. You are beginning writer so I do wish you the best of luck upon building vocab and such. I have nothing else to say other than that your story is interesting and I will continue reading. Updates seem stable and characters could use more work on the emotions but with time, I think I can see the characters slowly grow as well!! Take all reviews with great criticism and good luck on this story author~

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