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Wait, I can Warp reality?

作者: ForThe_Lolzs
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What is Wait, I can Warp reality?

WebNovel で公開されている、ForThe_Lolzs の作者が書いた Wait, I can Warp reality? の小説を読んでください。Our Main character one day gained the ability to warp reality!The only problem being that he's not in a Fictional world with this power.No, he's in ours!What will he do with such an ability? What will...

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Our Main character one day gained the ability to warp reality! The only problem being that he's not in a Fictional world with this power. No, he's in ours! What will he do with such an ability? What will he change? What Waifus will he create? Read to find out! P.S Oh and the girls on the book cover? Yeah they'll be in the story.

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My life could be an interesting journey to embark on, while it could be a disturbing one to read at all. Don’t get me wrong; I am not saying no one could actually fit in my shoes or do the things I have done. I’m just saying nobody can… Yeah, you heard me right. It’s like I don’t know you anymore. You’ve changed since this past week, and I don’t know what is wrong with you. I’m just— Esther kept in with the nagging and nagging; her voice felt like it was scratching the veins inside my head until— Well, in that case, to hell with the relationship, to hell with school, and to hell with every other person who thinks I’m going through a phase… except my mum… I love my mummy so much. I raised my voice back at her. As everyone around the school block stopped and watched me perform my madness, just like my mum would have said if she was here, and I could notice the shock of my outburst in Esther’s expression as she took steps away from me. Yeah! Just go! Just walk away just like every other person in my life. I don’t care!!! Not anymore!! I let out my mind loudly this time, and I felt satisfied in a way and a little weary from all the screaming. Letting out a deep breath, I fell back into the school fountain. I just didn’t give a damn what anyone else thought anymore… including me. Well, I have had a lot on my mind, okay? I just lost fifty thousand to a twelve-year-old. My dog was hurt, and my uncle just completed one whole month on the couch. Now, so yeah, I have got responsibilities in my hands. I poured out my mind to the old man as he stared at me with an unreadable expression on his face. “For a month”? How? And how can your d- “Don’t bother asking trust me you don’t wanna know you don’t wanna know”

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kickyx
kickyxLv13kickyx

For a novel based off of reality, the people inside it and the logic used are far from being real. First of all, his family somehow doesn't become shocked at the changes in the world and instead think its the MC doing it because he told them he would do that if he had powers. Now, lets think about this a bit more. There are 8 billion people in the world and they believed only the mc had the idea to change the "texture pack" of the world? Secondly, Reality Manipulation is NOT omnipotence or anywhere near it my guy. Losing your track of thought for a moment whilst utilizing the power would render the result you desired completely different than what actually happened. Thirdly, Reality Manipulation does not protect his body in any way shape or form, he would die 1 million times before he was even able to witness the universe be created, as that would mean he made it so he could either breathe in space, which is impossible because there is no oxygen in spacee, or wouldn't need oxygen. Suddenly being switched from an oxygen-based lifeform into one that isnt would destroy his body before he could even think of healing himself. Finally, before anyone comes at me and says its based off fiction and all that bs, the author chose to use our world, which means the MC and the characters would have to follow the rules of our world, unless the MC changed them of course. But, this would make the world not be ours and make the synopsis redundant. Overall, 2 stars, writing quality brings up the novel by 1 star.

GoodDreamsWillEnd
GoodDreamsWillEndLv1GoodDreamsWillEnd

I haven't found any grammar problems nor have I had any trouble reading. the story, so far, is creative and changing things up a little. the only warning I can give is that the story is not meant to make sense in some moments which might throw off some. I also wish to see more updates since I would like to see where this ends. I can definitely see this becoming a good story if the quality keeps improving like in the recent chapters.

Netnert
NetnertLv3Netnert

Its good. Author if you read this please update it more. minimum characters. minimum characters. minimum characters. minimum characters.

Buns1423
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cd_zito
cd_zitoLv1cd_zito

É bom, mas dá para melhorar como colocar uma história de onde veio seus poderes e se possível atualizar mais esa fanfic porquê é necessário

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