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Veil of Visions

作者: Spraglly
Fantasy
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What is Veil of Visions

WebNovel で公開されている、Spraglly の作者が書いた Veil of Visions の小説を読んでください。In the sprawling and untamed world of Lumina, where ancient secrets lie buried beneath every stone and shadow, destiny bestows its Gifts with stringent expectations rather than favor. For Cael, a dete...

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In the sprawling and untamed world of Lumina, where ancient secrets lie buried beneath every stone and shadow, destiny bestows its Gifts with stringent expectations rather than favor. For Cael, a determined and cunning youth marked by poverty, the upcoming Rite of Essence is more than a mere passage into adulthood—it is a gateway to alter his precarious fate. The Rite of Essence, a revered and daunting ceremony, offers him a rare chance to break the cycle of hardship that has tethered him. Success in the trial promises a Gift—supernatural powers granted by the world’s essence, capable of lifting him from poverty and into prominence. However, the stakes are perilously high, as failure means a dissipation into raw mana, feeding the very land that has both cradled and cursed his existence. Note - This is my first book and I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoy writing it. I have spent hours planning and organizing my thoughts so a rough idea for an ending is planned along with the story but as i gain experience in writing things may change. I want to hear your feedback and any suggestions you may have for the novel. Also if you notice any grammatical errors please let me know i will fix them right away.

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This book has been an absolute pleasure to read insofar. Spraglly does a great job of painting a coherent scene and really sparks the imagination. The character design and progression is super interesting, with the main character becoming more confident and powerful with each chapter, and it is very easy to sympathize with him. Though this is the authors first book, it is not apparent at all with this book. The final chapter was the best written and my personal favorite, but all of the chapters were captivating and interesting with no notable faults. Super excited to see what comes of this story and I can’t wait for more chapters!

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