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Uzumaki's commandments

作者: nexusstar21
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WebNovel で公開されている、nexusstar21 の作者が書いた Uzumaki's commandments の小説を読んでください。Tatsumi died mysteriously one day but he worked up in the world of naruto.Not having any chakra in a clan known for having lots a chakra is going to cause alot of problems in his life.But his troubles...

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Tatsumi died mysteriously one day but he worked up in the world of naruto. Not having any chakra in a clan known for having lots a chakra is going to cause alot of problems in his life. But his troubles didn't end at just not having chakra his mother mysteriously caught a terminal illness causing her to be sick. Having no way to pay for her medical bills life for tatsumi seemed hopeless. That is until he awakened the power of the first commandment.Armed with the powers of the ten commandments and the demon king. He became a legend in the underground shinobi world known for his cold demeanor,cruelty and blatant disregard for human life. Earned him the name the black devil.But one faithful encounter left him to wonder is he the only transmigrator in this world. So watch his journey unfold as he makes freinds and enemies along tge way. Will he be able to save his mother and those he cared about or will he be subdued by the commandments becoming the next demon king

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In the dimly lit alleys of a world tainted by the insatiable grip of lust and shrouded in the clandestine dance of shadows, a young woman named Sitara found herself unwittingly drawn into a perilous game. Innocence radiated from her soul, a rare gem in a society corrupted by the darkest desires. Little did she know, her journey was becoming an inexorable spiral toward a destiny she would desperately try to escape. In the echoes of her thoughts, Sitara often contemplated life as a grand chessboard, a metaphorical representation that offered a semblance of order in the chaos surrounding her. She mused about the intricate moves, each capable of altering the course of one's destiny. "In this game of life, the king is the most crucial piece on the board," she whispered, her voice akin to a gentle breeze. "But, the queen holds unparalleled power. Still, one must never forget that if the king falls, everything crumbles into oblivion." As Sitara wandered through dilapidated alleyways and forgotten streets, her contemplations resonated, weaving a melody of uncertainty and fear. Unbeknownst to her, the shadows observed every step she took, anticipating the inevitable checkmate that awaited her. The revelation blurred the once-clear distinction between right and wrong, plunging Sitara into a muddled tapestry of deceit. She grappled with the weight of newfound knowledge, torn between loyalty and self-preservation. The chessboard of life stretched before her, a chaotic battlefield where pawns danced to the whims of unseen players. The game had commenced, and Sitara stood at its center, grappling with the realization that every move she made had consequences rippling through the fabric of this distorted reality. Unbeknownst to her, Sitara's journey unfolded as a tragic symphony orchestrated by forces beyond her comprehension. The king, the queen, and the pawns moved in a dance of shadows, and she, trapped in the midst of it all, had to navigate the treacherous path ahead. In a world ruled by lust, Sitara became an unwitting player in a game where the lines between right and wrong, ally and adversary, were blurred. The shadows whispered secrets, and the chessboard of life transformed into a battleground where destinies hung in the balance. As Sitara faced the impending storm, she stood at the crossroads, compelled to decide whether she would be a mere pawn manipulated by unseen hands or a player capable of defying the predetermined moves, carving her destiny amidst the shadows.

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I think this story and character have potential just need to make changes you need to properly outline the story from the story start .There is creativity i believe you can make this a great story but for now the story needs some work .

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Many errors, hard to understand, very random. one second he fights three ninjas, the next a transmigrator and immediately after hundreds of enemies pop up.

Amos1904
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Reading it made me kinda angry. Too many errors and grammar is bad

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