Twilight : The Keys Of Power

All the twilight fics I have read were huge disappointments, even the few that were well crumbled into even worse disappointments. However im liking this, a unique power and a good storyline. Update more often.

Great set up so far, I like how the MC is getting introduced to each of the keys, Locke and Key fanfic are almost non-existent, I hope you manage to complete this one your doing great so far.

Great work plz keep posting

Hope this is going to be continued it’ good enough to be anyway I enjoyed the changes made to it last update

The characters are bland and lack depth. Imagine an AI tries to write these characters and their friendships. Everything works grammatically and contextually but there's just something off enough that it feels wrong. Couldn't make it through chapter 5 b/c it felt like I was watching a bad commercial. Felt like at the end there would be an ad for hiking gear with all these 'friends' smiling in the background telling me to buy buy buy.

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the story is very good so far but please keep it up and dont drop it. the only lock and key fanfic and im loving it so far.[img=recommend]

Thought I’d leave a review since there aren’t many of them. The story is interesting due to the rather different power given to the MC it sort of makes me think of the celestial spirit keys from fairy tail but obviously different. The most recent chapter however was a little downhill in my opinion but it wouldn’t be interesting if the story didn’t have ups and downs. Overall it’s good so far just hope it keeps going and doesn’t get dropped