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This is my first book, please read it, idk if it’s any good so tell me

作者: Revy_Lagoon
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# ACTION
# ADVENTURE
# ROMANCE
Chapter 1The beginning.

Asuna was walking home from her part time job. *THUD * two guys were standing there when they went to hit her there was a thud sound, she quickly jumped out of harms way, as the weapon hit the ground, she ran for her life.

Shit they found me, I gotta out run them !

She got her gun out and ran, so if they got her she could use a gun.

It took them 20 minutes to catch up with her. They had guns as well and shot her from her back once they were close enough

They shot her on her back, no one saw or heard because it was silent, they were smart enough not to got loud guns. She didn't make a sound, she tried as hard as her could to make sure she did not show any fear.

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