The Wise King

The story is serious but at the same time makes you laugh because of the miss understandings. It has potential, would like to know power levels/ stages if any and more of the world structure/map

Writing Quality is great, I can easily understand things and situations, there are little to no errors at all. Stability of Updates is acceptable, I guess. But there were days you didn't release a chapter. But there's no harm done. Story Development is good, the Ruling concept is a bit used, but since you have been trying to make it unique, I guess it's all good. Character Design is good, an powerful MC both in magic and title(He's the king), it's the MC's first time to rule and I look forward to how he will lead his country. World Background is great too, so no complaints there.

The story is well set and interesting. After all, I love Kingdom Building and i dont see quite a problem right now. Hopefully, u will not drop the novel and keep on the good work. Cyu soon!!

Great novel. It's a lot of fun to read. Hope the fun continue and have my support! The great (misunderstood muscle brained) King! Become the great man your smart sister believe you to be!

*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: 2 things, you should not start something you can't finish, and second, you were on the high end of commonly accepted chapter sizes.;,;. Positive Feedback: Perfect 5 stars, need I say more? Personal Feedback: I would have continued this novel, but I see that you have dropped it, so I do not wish to continue a dropped novel.;,;.

Haha-your novel is really a fun read with amazing writing style. Story development seems fine just a little enhancement required in story development otherwise ur novel seems great! ^^ x keep writing. :')

An excellent book. Unfortunately the writer has dropped this novel so it is better if you don’t read it because you get addicted to it, trust me I know. One of the best original novels I have ever read lol. So humorous 😂😂

Overall this is day by day story of the life of King Roland. He is a hard-working and caring king trying to do his best. Things don't always go right, and he must face those challenges as they come. If this interest you, then I suggest read more of this riveting novel. --------------------------------------------- The first thing, the writing is ok. The word "practice" is misspelled a few time and few other words, but the writing style definitely readable while still enjoyable. 3/5 Even though you are not cranking out a lot of chapters a week, you are still keeping up at least 5-6 chapters a week, and I think that good enough. 5/5 The first few chapters set the scene very well, but its hard to draw you in. Whenever I'm in meeting in real life, I hardly pay attention, so this was rough for me to get through. The thing that makes the story great though is its pace. I usually don't like slow novels, but this is almost like reading the diary of Roland and knowing all he did. For those that love details and the small parts, you do great in that field, and it shows as the chapters progress. 4/5 The leading character's name, to be honest, I was disappointed with. He shares the same name as the main character of Release that Witch. So I didn't feel like he was very unique and more of rip off. Maybe he or maybe he wasn't. Just my opinion. The other characters weren't bad, and as the story progressed, I tended to like them more. 3/5 The world background is a slow building one. As the main character goes to the new locations or re-check places out, you get welcomed to these very explicit sceneries. It is very refreshing. 5/5