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The Vision

作者: QuackVader
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If beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder, what then does the vision see? Man reincarnates as Vision in the MCU. ............................ Want to write a Fanfic but can't write a synopsis for the life of me A/N: Will be posted on Scribblehub, FF, RoyalRoad and AO3

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Okay so before I review I want to eat everyone know that Vision doesn't have a PP... BUT! But he will! Comment the Kilometers it should have so the author notices😂. Jokes aside let's review and not give 1 star reviews based on one thing alone (You know who you are🙄). 1- Writing Quality: The story is very well written but I don't know if everything is grammatically correct in sentences but I honestly don't care about that since I'm here for good readable books and this is well written. The spacing is good, the differentiation between calls/comms, AI's and characters is well distinguished and there are few to no misspelled words. The only "downside" would be the word count that could be in a auxiliary chapter instead of an official one. [4 Stars Here] 2-Story Development: I consider story development as "Plot Progression" and having that in mind the plot is good and the start is a fun read. We see the MC overcoming his "death" because of his robotic processing and the mind stone so minor existential crisis but it was well played out. The only downside of the plot progression would be the length of each chapter (as of chapter 14), due to them being short/small not much happens in one chapter if we go about it individual. [4 Stars Here] 3-Character Design: Character design for me is the combination of personality (how they act), their socializations (superficial npc's vs actual characters) and their interactions (what they do) and this one so far has been a great point with the integration/override of the MC in Vision, to his growth as a character to how he deals with other people. The other characters have depth if I can call it that and it feels good to read and not at all forced. [5 Stars Here] 4-Updating Stability: We get chapters daily, can't complain and I'm loving it. [5 Stars Here] 5-World Background: This to be is the setting of the scenes, the details in the background and where the fricks the characters are and this is done so well I won't even rant about it. [5 Stars Here] Overall: 4.6 Opinion: I honestly expected this to be a flop, can't say it won't be with how authors end up either dropping (sometimes they call it hiatus) a book or derailing the story till the initial engagement the readers had ends up dying and I sincerely hope this isn't one of those cases but time will tell but if this book ends up being dropped, going on a Hiatus or even derailing I'll make a new review and delete this one. My advice to everyone who stumbled here is just "read 5 chapters and decide if you enjoyed it till then or not." so take it with a grain of salt just don't give 5 star reviews with only "more more more more" like you want to fill up a word count and don't give 1 star reviews just because of one thing you didn't like, there's more to a story than just one thing.(

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