The shadow of a Villain

Shamelessness is something I have mastered which is why I will give my perfect book a 5 star and I can see people starting to disagree but if you disagree then that is your opinion and id like to hear about it But now that aside I want everyone to read this book and tell me their honest opinions about it if they liked it or not if they like the characters and stuff like that Since this is my first novel but third try at writing this novel I have to say that I consider myself an amateur which is also the reason why you might think it’s boring or not entertaining enough but atleast bear with it if you think it could turn better and if you don’t then you don’t I would also like to point out that English is not my first language so I will have spelling mistakes and I try to make it better but I don’t have much time from between school work and writing If you have questions then I will answer them and if you know me in real life then shut up and don’t mention this novel if I don’t start the conversation or if I am not drunk since it feels kind of awkward So that’s it hope you have fun reading this bye

REVIEW TIME First things first this is a non harem for anybody wondering, just here to help. Time for the deep stuff 1. Writing This novel has pretty good writing, obviously not the best since the author doesn’t seem to have English as is first language. so expect few mistakes like which being spelled as wich or some minor grammar errors. The reason why it’s a 4 star for writing is solely to do with when the book gets confusing, but in my time reading to me it wasn’t as serious for me to consider dropping and sometimes I even liked the confusion. 2. Characters I like the main character and the supporting characters a lot, even when some are generic and annoying I have no problems as the novel kinda portrays all these generic types while the mc is fresh and new, some may call the mc a little edgy and he is sometimes, but I feel he is more deranged than edgy. my biggest gripe is with having multiple POV’s I feel that some characters have interesting personalities, but just don’t get enough screen time. 3. Story development Personally the story is a little confusing and will be my lowest score of 3, while I was reading I was sometimes confused by here the story was going. I know to some that is a turn off and I agree but to me when the story isn’t confused it becomes pretty fun to read. 4. World background The world is pretty perfect for me, with multiple races and dungeons as well humans not being at war with the demons like all the other novels out there. The kingdom we know of so far is fleshed out and filled with politics and betrayal. So 5/5, and mate be the best part of the shole novel. Fun novel would recommend

I really don't understand why people think that putting 'it'll get better after x chapters, just trust me,bro' will magically make people willing to read trash in blind hope that it'll get better? Your job as an author is to make an interesting story, and if you can't grab the reader's interest within the first few paragraphs, then you failed.