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The Scourge: A Young Boy's Journey into Magic

作者: Lex_Lorger
Fantasy
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What is The Scourge: A Young Boy's Journey into Magic

WebNovel で公開されている、Lex_Lorger の作者が書いた The Scourge: A Young Boy's Journey into Magic の小説を読んでください。Have you ever wondered how a villains are created? How a seemingly normal person could become the scum of the earth? Come on an adventure and witness the growth of Ciaran. Join him and see what fate h...

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Have you ever wondered how a villains are created? How a seemingly normal person could become the scum of the earth? Come on an adventure and witness the growth of Ciaran. Join him and see what fate has instore for him, and what he will do to fight back, and just how far he will be willing to go to get what he wants. Ciaran Clades is a boy born into the world of Dyrta, a world full of magic and wonder. Born to the Clade family, merchants by trade, he lives a well of life, full of the happiness of the middle class. All is going well for the young lad, until it doesn't. [A chapter has 1,500+ words] [At least 1 chapters per day, possibly more, depending on my schedule, and on reader activity]

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Chaos has fallen on the earth and the darkness has been given it's freedom to bring upon it's wrath on the living it considered unworthy. The Armageddon has come crashing down into the world at an unexpected time as the skies shook with the force of the shattered seals that hold together the gates of purgatory and the imbalance that has occurred through the planes that separated the world of the spiritual from the world of the physical. Terror rains down on the powerless living ones that have no idea of the wickedness that would follow with the shattering of these seals and now the land, air and seas have been plunged into a state of destruction, death and desolation. The sin of a child and the failure of an entity, the warnings that were not listened to, the hidden that which to come onto the light. Such many events brings the world to this unfortunate disaster and now the days of suffering continues. Now with their fates interconnected and their souls tied to become one, both physical and spiritual beings would now have to traverse the path that would lead them to the fulfillment of their destinies which would either bring redemption for the guilts of their sins and what it had caused the world or would lead to their exile and destruction. As they continue forward fighting against all odds to achieve their goals, they would slowly unravel the mysteries and truths behind these unfortunate events that would lead to a long road of suffering, regrets, deaths and sorrows and eventually carry them forward till they find the redemption they seek...... Or maybe not.

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1 :School Days
2 :Growing Up

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I see a lot of potential in this story. Enough to continue reading to see where it goes. Plus I love chaotic neutral and evil neutral MC's. Writing quality 3.5/5: Writing quality gets my harshest score. I recommend either an editor or taking the time to proofread. 2/5 on spelling. There are frequent spelling errors and even in some chapter titles. Luckily its mostly typo's or autocorrects. 4/5 on grammar. It reads like its written by a native speaker and grammar is much more important than spelling as it directly affects the reading experience in my opinion. Updating stability 5/5: Keep it up. Most stories don't get readers until 100-200ch for three reasons. Readers like to binge read, they don't like to wait a week inbetween chapters and they don't like starting a novel for it to get dropped a couple weeks later. Author has the first two down. The 3rd aspect comes from trust and that only comes with time and 100s of chapters released. consistently. Story development 5/5: Original story, no info dumps, kind of reminds me of tales of herding gods how the MC learns from multiple very different masters who also double as his parents. Author also does foreshadowing right, doesn't give out too much information too early to spoil the punchline. The theatrics is a nice touch too. ALSO NO INFO DUMPS. My only recommendation would be less drama and more tragedy. My only complaint is that the dryads are borderline deux ex machina, not quite but almost. Character design 5/5: Kind of early for this one. There are quite a few unique characters. I can't put a finger on a singular antagonist or protagonist, almost like MC is his own antagonist, that or the world itself, which stays true to the chaotic nature of the novel. I thought it was weird how early life the novel starts and how mature the MC and his friends are, but that gets explained for the most part. Looking forward to see future character growth. World building: 5/5 No info dumps. There is just enough dialogue to explain where they are and their surroundings. And thats all the readers really need at this point in the stiry. My recommendation is to use more descriptions to better build the world in the mind of the reader. As the setting might be clear to the author but us readers we can only go based on the words used to describe the setting. Also be shameless and write your own review already author. A lot of people skip stories without any reviews.

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Honestly, at the first page of chapter 1 I quickly added this book to my library, leme give a spoiler, there is a child born like a demonic potato 😁now i know you will definitely check it out, this author deserve more views to be honest.

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